go over the comment and fixed it up

go over the comment and fixed it up

In the file that I attached you will see my instructor comment try to fix it up. The comment will be on the right  of the documents  . I also attached grading symbol and rubric 

also this is my group statement to give u a back ground about the assignment:

Pinterest introduces Promoted Pins to advertise to a more diverse group of millennials.We would like to find the effectiveness of Promoted Pins targeted towards new male users and the reactions of both female and new males users. The value would be to show clients the potential to reach a new demographic of male users through different uses of advertisements.

  
ENGL 317 grading symbols and rubric.pdf 

Pinterest (Autosaved).docx 

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